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Dear Top writer, (1) I hope you can help me re-write my undergraduate college ap

Dear Top writer,
(1) I hope you can help me re-write my undergraduate college application essays for the University of California, based on the publishs I provided, because I believe that my publishs are disorder and might not be a proper answers to the questions, and I hope you can help me change them into well-organized and proper answers to the questions.
(2) I hope you can enrich my essays, especially some details, feelings and specific events to make my essay more competitive and special among other applicants.
(3) I hope you can help me enrich and rewrite each of the essays up to 350 words, because I think they are too long to be strong and perfect.
(4)I would also be very grateful if you could help me to improve the essay overall, so that it can be a strong essay for my UC application (my intended major will be public policy, economics)
(4) If you have any other questions or information, please feel free to contact me.
(5) please try to use some advanced vocabulary and good sentences to make the essay more competitive and appeal to the admission officers.
Thank you very much for your time and kind help in my college application!
Sincerely